Tuesday, November 15, 2011

Wanna play? Let's rewrite this piece of crap.?

"coded candy children", I love this line. The Easter Bunny is purely commercial, but we are all willing to hide the lies for the sake of our children's enjoyment. I enjoyed this poem very much and I don't think it needs to be rewritten at all. Rhyme, meter, and flow are great and the subject is entertaining.

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